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This was meant to be a simple follow-up for #1752 (comment), but one bug leading Claude to spot another, this now contains a bunch of fixes for ICMP Error messages' inner packets payload detection and checksum validation.

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@qmonnet qmonnet added bug Something isn't working area/nat Related to Network Address Translation (NAT) labels Sep 2, 2026
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The change separates incremental checksum calculation from mutation, updates embedded transport checksums during NAT translation, and improves ICMPv4 and ICMPv6 quoted-payload validation. ICMP extension padding and header offsets now use complete embedded packet sizes.

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ICMP embedded packet handling

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Incremental checksum API
net/src/checksum.rs, net/src/headers/mod.rs
The Checksum trait adds non-mutating incremental_checksum. In-place update methods now return Result<&mut Self, Self::Error>. Tests cover update ordering and no-op behavior.
Embedded transport checksum translation
net/src/headers/embedded.rs, nat/src/icmp_handler/icmp_error_msg.rs
Embedded TCP, UDP, ICMPv4, and ICMPv6 checksums can be initialized or updated with the quoted IP version. NAT translation updates changed inner addresses and ports while preserving disabled IPv4 UDP checksums.
ICMP quoted-payload validation
net/src/icmp4/mod.rs, net/src/icmp6/mod.rs
ICMPv4 and ICMPv6 parsing bounds payload and extension lengths and checks embedded-packet completeness against actual payload data. Tests cover truncation and RFC 4884 extensions.
ICMP packet generation and alignment
net/src/packet/mod.rs, net/src/headers/embedded.rs
ICMP extension padding uses complete quoted packet sizes. RFC 4884 alignment uses IPv4 4-byte and IPv6 8-byte boundaries. ICMP header offsets advance from the Ethernet and network header positions.
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In `@net/src/headers/embedded.rs`:
- Around line 643-645: Update the EmbeddedTransport::Udp handling so RFC 1624
checksum adjustment is skipped when the embedded IPv4 UDP checksum field is
zero, preserving the disabled-checksum sentinel; apply this rule only for IPv4
and retain checksum updates for valid checksums and other IP versions.

In `@net/src/icmp4/mod.rs`:
- Line 1324: Use RFC 4884 byte alignment for quoted datagrams: update the
padding calculation in net/src/icmp4/mod.rs:1324-1324 to next_multiple_of(4) and
net/src/icmp6/mod.rs:1375-1375 to next_multiple_of(8). Also update
EmbeddedHeaders::check_full_payload to accept lengths that are multiples of 4/8
and require padding shorter than 4/8 bytes for IPv4/IPv6 respectively.

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There are correctness issues in newly added/updated logic and tests (notably RFC padding boundary usage in tests and UDP/IPv4 zero-checksum semantics during address-translation checksum updates) that should be addressed before approval.

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Pull request overview

This PR improves handling of ICMPv4/ICMPv6 error messages that quote an inner IP packet, focusing on more accurate embedded-payload detection and correct/incremental checksum handling during NAT translation, with expanded tests to validate these behaviors.

Changes:

  • Fix embedded-payload parsing for ICMP error messages (better separation of ICMP header vs payload when deciding quoted-packet length).
  • Refactor checksum incremental update API to support in-place updates and avoid no-op updates that can change checksum “zero” representations.
  • Add property-based tests for detecting full vs truncated embedded payloads, and expand NAT translation tests to validate checksum updates.
File summaries
File Description
net/src/icmp6/mod.rs Adjust ICMPv6 embedded payload parsing and add tests around embedded payload completeness.
net/src/icmp4/mod.rs Adjust ICMPv4 embedded payload parsing and add tests around embedded payload completeness.
net/src/headers/mod.rs Update checksum-increment test usage to match in-place API.
net/src/headers/embedded.rs Update embedded transport checksum update helpers to use new in-place checksum API and skip no-op updates.
net/src/checksum.rs Introduce pure incremental_checksum helper and make incremental updates apply in-place with error handling.
nat/src/icmp_handler/icmp_error_msg.rs Update NAT translation for ICMP inner packets to also update inner transport checksum when inner IP addresses change; extend tests to validate checksum behavior.
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nat/src/icmp_handler/icmp_error_msg.rs:146

  • Same concern as in source translation: for UDP/IPv4, a zero checksum (0x0000) commonly means "no checksum"; incrementally updating it during address translation changes semantics and likely creates an invalid checksum. Consider skipping the update when the embedded transport is UDP with checksum 0 on IPv4.
    // See the comment on the source address translation: update the checksum of the inner
    // transport header to account for the new address in the pseudo-header.
    if let Some(transport) = embedded_headers.try_embedded_transport_mut() {
        transport.update_checksum_for_address(old_addr, target_addr);
    }
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qmonnet and others added 4 commits September 3, 2026 11:06
When parsing an ICMP Error message, we determine whether the embedded IP
packet fragment carries the full payload of the original packet, so that
consumers know whether they can recompute the checksum of the embedded
transport header from scratch. But we had two bugs in the full-payload
detection, leading to false negatives:

- Method check_full_payload() compares the length of the ICMP payload
  with the total length of the original IP packet, but we pass the
  number of bytes left in the cursor _after the embedded headers are
  consumed_, so the length of these headers is counted twice. Save the
  length before consuming the headers instead.

- The length of the "original datagram" field is stored in the ICMP
  header (RFC 4884), and payload_length() retrieves it at a fixed offset
  in the buffer that it receives. But this buffer starts with the
  Ethernet header, not the ICMP header. Pass the buffer at the offset
  for the ICMP header instead.

Fixes: 859192a ("feat(net): Check whether ICMP embedded packet is full")
Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
The Bolero generator for the headers embedded in ICMPv6 Error messages
sets the next header of the inner IPv6 header to ICMP, when it generates
an embedded ICMPv6 header. As a consequence, we never parse the embedded
header back as ICMPv6, and the fuzz tests relying on this generator
don't cover embedded ICMPv6 headers at all. Use ICMPv6 instead.

Fixes: f9652c5 ("feat(net): Support ICMP-in-ICMP")
Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
The implementation of the increment_update_checksum() method hesitated
between in-place checksum update (it takes a "&mut self" but doesn't use
it) and returning the updated checksum. This led to bugs in calling
functions, which assumed in-place update and discarded the result
instead of updating the packet header with the new checksum. We recently
fixed one of these functions (update_checksum() for EmbeddedTransport),
but increment_update_checksum_32bit() and translate_inner_icmp() are
still broken. Let's fix this by making increment_update_checksum()
update in-place, so that no caller risks discarding the updated
checksum.

Fixes: f181232 ("fix(net): Store incremental checksum updates")
Fixes: 89446b7 ("feat(nat): Translate inner ICMP Echo header for ICMP Error messages")
Fixes: 45ed7b0 ("feat(net): Implement checksum handling for EmbeddedTransport")
Fixes: 6ed51bc ("feat(net): Implement incremental checksum update")
Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
In the NAT code, when translating the headers for an embedded packet
fragment within an ICMP Error message, we update the checksum when
translating the TCP/UDP ports or ICMP identifier; but we somehow omitted
to update the checksum when translating the inner IP addresses, even
though they're part of the pseudo-header considered for the
TCP/UDP/ICMPv6 (but not ICMPv4) checksum! Let's update the checksum when
the addresses change.

Fixes: fab39ef ("feat(nat): Translate ICMP Error messages' inner IP packet")
Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
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625-630: 🎯 Functional Correctness | 🟠 Major | ⚡ Quick win

Exclude Icmp6Type::ParamProblem from extension support.

payload_length reads the fifth octet as an RFC 4884 length attribute. For ICMPv6 Parameter Problem, that octet is the high byte of the pointer field. A nonzero pointer can create a false quoted-packet boundary and cause incorrect full-payload detection.

RFC 4884 defines ICMPv6 extensions only for Destination Unreachable and Time Exceeded. (rfc-editor.org)

Proposed fix
-            Icmp6Type::DestUnreachable(_) | Icmp6Type::TimeExceeded(_) | Icmp6Type::ParamProblem(_)
+            Icmp6Type::DestUnreachable(_) | Icmp6Type::TimeExceeded(_)

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In `@net/src/icmp6/mod.rs` around lines 625 - 630, Update supports_extensions to
return true only for Icmp6Type::DestUnreachable and Icmp6Type::TimeExceeded,
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Problem message with a nonzero pointer high byte and verify it is not treated as
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qmonnet and others added 4 commits September 3, 2026 14:36
Add checksum validation to the bolero tests for ICMP inner packet
translation.

Also add tests to validate the behaviour of checksum's incremental
update: in particular, validate that we never update the checksum when
the value does not change, or it might result on a different value
(0x0000 instead of 0xffff for 1's complement), possibly associated to
the "no checksum" value for UDP.

Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
The padded "original datagram" field of an ICMP Error message is aligned
on 32 bits for ICMPv4 and on 64 bits for ICMPv6, not on 32 and 64 bytes:
we reject valid fields, a 132-byte one for instance. We also ignore the
128-byte minimum that RFC 4884 mandates for the field, so we'd reject
the padding that an inner packet shorter than 128 bytes requires. Let's
account for the padding length properly.

Link: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc4884
Fixes: 859192a ("feat(net): Check whether ICMP embedded packet is full")
Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
The generator never sets the optional length attribute of the ICMP
header: it writes it at the length of the headers that follow the outer
IP header, instead of at the offset of the ICMP header. It also pads the
"original datagram" field up to 128 octets of transport payload, where
RFC 4884 counts the octets of the whole inner packet.

Fixes: 7bbad08 ("test(net): Add a Bolero generator for a full ICMP Error message packet")
Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
Storing the incremental update made these writes real for the first
time, and with them the write-side rules the old no-op never had to
obey.

A UDP datagram over IPv4 may carry a zero checksum to say the sender
computed none. There is no sum there to fold a delta into, so
translating a port or an address of such a quote turned the marker into
a checksum for a sum nobody took. Zero is spoken for on the other side
too: over IPv6 the field is mandatory, so a fold that lands on zero goes
out as the other spelling instead.

Which rule applies depends on the IP version of the packet the header
was quoted from, which `EmbeddedTransport` cannot see, hence the new
argument.

Link: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc768
Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
Signed-off-by: Daniel Noland <daniel@githedgehog.com>
Co-authored-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
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qmonnet force-pushed the pr/qmonnet/increment-checksum branch from 4145bbc to 4d413fc Compare September 3, 2026 15:07
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